Friday, May 22, 2015

The (Pretty) Great Equalizer

In Evanston, Illinois, there is a distinct socioeconomic divide. One of the most important missions of Evanston Township High School, and reasonably so, is to help overcome this divide, whether it be in the form academic or extracurricular equality. Currently, however, there is a visible difference between the performance of students on the lower side of the economic spectrum and those on the higher side. Although ETHS should be applauded for all of the progress it has made so far, the problem will not go away for a long, long time. However, what ETHS does not see such a gap in as a result of differences in economic status is the performance of athletes. Sports are an incredibly powerful equalizer, as someone’s athleticism is not a result of how much money they have. It can certainly have an effect, but overall money has very little to do with it. It comes down to determination, leadership, dedication, and as a result, sports are a fantastic tool to help aid the youth of impoverished communities in learning these important skills and evening the playing ground with financially better off youth.
A key element that a sport can provide an impoverished youth that other activities cannot is something to strive for. In the novel The Boys in the Boat by Daniel James Brown, the protagonist, a working class student attending the University of Washington named Joe Rantz, works hard to realize his dream of becoming a successful rower. The novel is based on the real story of the team that won the eight-person Olympic rowing competition against Hitler-controlled Germany in 1936. Joe Rantz and his band of misfit rowers defeated the rowing powerhouses of the East, schools like Harvard and Yale, defeated the power houses across the Atlantic, Oxford and Cambridge, and proved themselves worthy enough to represent the United States of America at the 1936 Olympics. The novel is a very accurate portrayal, for that matter, as the author obtained most of his information regarding the story from Joe Rantz himself, the two men being neighbors. As a result, Brown’s portrayal of the emotional baggage that Joe Rantz took along on his journey as a poor young man using sports as an outlet and a motivator is spot on. One quote in particular summarizes what rowing meant to Rantz, and how it would lead to him becoming an Olympic champion: “To fail at this rowing business would mean, at best, returning to a small, bleak town on the Olympics Peninsula with nothing ahead of him but the prospect of living alone in a cold, empty, half-built house, surviving as best he could” (Brown, 13). A lot was on the line for Rantz, and the result was international success. Rowing gave Rantz the platform to prove himself, to the world, literally, and acted as the inspiration for him to work hard and pursue a difficult dream.
Joe Rantz is one of many young people living in poverty who are able to find solace and able to stand out because of athletics. Because of stories such as Joe Rantz’s, many organizations have made it their mission to bring sports to less fortunate communities. The United Nations implemented a plan called the Millennium Project with the goal of reducing the growth of poverty and hunger around the world. The Millennium Project was a very large and overreaching project with many components to it to achieve this goal. One of those components was bringing sports to communities of poverty. They describe this benefits of sports as such: “Many of the core values inherent in sport are compatible with the principles necessary for development and peace, such as fair play, co-operation, sharing and respect. The life skills learned through sport help empower individuals and enhance psychosocial well being, such as increased resiliency, self-esteem and connections with others” (UN Millennium Project). By providing impoverished children with the opportunity to participate in sports, the Millennium Project offers fun and engaging ways to learn valuable life skills. The power of sports is its educational value without having to sit down children in a classroom.
As well as providing an outlet for impoverished youth to learn life values sports teach youth to be active and develop healthy habits. By playing sports, they are exercising, which is vital to help poor communities. According to the Food Research and Action Center (FRAC), people living in poverty are more vulnerable to becoming obese than well-off people. One of the reason that this is the case is that “low-income children are less likely to participate in organized sports...This is consistent with reports by low-income parents that expense and transportation problems are barriers to their children’s participation in physical activities” (FRAC). Although this is only one bullet point amongst many other reason why impoverished people are at higher risk for obesity, data points to the fact that getting youth involved in sports does help to reduce the odds. According to the Datalys Center, a center for sports injury research and prevention, “A study of public high schools found that 29% of boys and 34% of girls are overweight and 16% of boys and girls are obese. At these schools, students who participated in one or more sports were much less likely to be overweight or obese” (Datalys Center). There is undoubtedly a need for addressing the high risk poor youth have of becoming obese, and it is very clear that sports are one way to help prevent youth obesity.
Impoverished youth inherently have something that older people living in poverty do not, and that is the ability to work hard and leave their current situation. There is hope amongst children, and it is society’s job to provide some sense of tangibility for this hope. Although it is not the solution, sports are a large stepping stone on the path to helping to improve the lives of poor youth, giving them something to work towards, teaching them valuable life lessons, and helping them stay active and in shape. All youth are the future of the world, and to pave a road for all youth to travel along is the job of the current generation for the sake of a brighter future.

Work Cited
Brown, Daniel James. The Boys in the Boat. New York: Penguin Group, 2013. Print.

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"Sports Participation Helps Prevent Youth Obesity." Sports Facts (2005): n. pag. Web. 21 May
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You Probably Know...

Do you think you know
what lacks the ability
to picture color?

Do you think know
what cannot determine the
wealth of a person?

Do you think you
who does not care if you are
popular or not?

As it soars through the
Air, Water, Net, Basket, Goal

It does not give a -

Heart


Heart
Heart
My manager is upset
because I have been skipping work
for training.




-This week
is when I prove myself
to me
to my parents
to my friends
to the world.


Our rivals
who strut around in expensive sweat suits
who pay for their private trainers
who buy a new pair of $120 sneakers
every week.








The day has arrived.
The entire school has showed up
to watch our victory.
I sink into the moment.
Nothing else matters.
This is our time.
This is our game.
The ball leaps into the air
and I rocket up behind it.


-Training
is the only priority right now.
I can’t believe
my teachers are giving me work
when they know that the big game
is this week.





And I can think of no better finale
than to play
our rivals.



Every week
I drive by the city courts
and watch them play on gravely asphalt.
Their balls are worn
their shoes are old
their hoops have no nets.
I ease into my seat of my Audi
and relish in its comfort.

The day has arrived.
The entire school has showed up
to watch our victory.
I sink into the moment.
Nothing else matters.
This is our time.
This is our game.
The ball leaps into the air
and I rocket up behind it.


Thank You for the Chlorine Rashes

Even when the instructor let go,
even when the bubble came off,
even when the wall could no longer provide its unyielding support,
you made me do it myself.
But you never let go.
Even when my teachers loaded me with tests and projects,
even when the fruits of life weren’t so sweet,
even when anger coursed through my veins,
you comforted.
I could grip the yellow ball
and release all of the tension
with one kick
one strokes
one throw
and channel the angst into a laser
cutting through the back of the goal.

Grade point average?
Didn’t matter.
The cost of your clothes?
Didn’t matter.
When I stepped into the pool,
one forceful stride
and a streamline that took me to the bottom
so that I could launch to the top.
I was powerful.

The yellow ball would drop
and we launched like torpedos through the the sea
and all that mattered was the game.

Thank you for teaching me sportsmanship.
Thank you for keeping me in great shape.
Thank you for the friends.
Thank you for teaching me life.
And thanks for the chlorine rashes on the back of my neck

that reminded me it was worth it.

In Summary


Dear Reader

Dear Reader,
I’d like to sincerely thank you for giving my multi genre piece your time and patience. Certainly, it is a generic showing of gratitude, but nonetheless I mean it. I do not think that this project is the “peak” of all I have done this year. In fact, I do not think that the point of this assignment was to somehow lump everything from this year, the hundreds of thousands of words written and the thousands of pages read. No, I think that the point of this assignment was to reflect on what we have done, not summarize. So, in my opinion, I have done just that. I’ve read the poems, and I’ve analyzed the texts, so now it is my turn to take the role of the author and see what sort of chops I’ve developed.
The first piece is, of course, the expository essay, which argues that it is beneficial to bring athletics to impoverished you. The Boys in the Boat, by Daniel James Brown, was a heartwarming and inspiring story that got me thinking about how sports have affected my life, and how it could improve the lives of others. That was what inspired me to research and argue for athletic’s benefits, because I have learned almost as much in the pool as I have in the classroom. That was formed the basis of my paper, and the rest came easily as it was something that I could write for days about, solely from personal experience if I weren’t to include research. My thesis is what also acted as the golden thread, the theme that sports are an effective equalizer and overcome socioeconomic and cultural divides to “even the playing field” (I know, I know, punny).
The first genre piece is a series of four Haikus, called “You Probably Know…”. I know what you’re thinking: Really, Sean, haikus? You would be partially right, but I thought that the message that I was trying to portray was actually well suited to be a series of haikus because of its simplicity. I wanted the message to be simple and streamlined, the message being that balls, which act as a metonymy for sports, cannot see color, money, or anything else except for wherever the ball is intended to go. The end of the fourth haiku ends in a dash because a profane word should follow, but it isn’t appropriate nor does it fit the syllable requirement.
The second genre piece is a poem for two voices, “Heart,” and it is fairly obvious that the golden thread is the main message in this one. I consciously made the two voices have the same name to really drive home the idea that the two voices, although different in their economic status, have the same goal and the same means to get there. Like most poems for two voices, I matched up certain lines to make the performance interesting and engaging. What differed, however, was the way in which I made the end stanzas the exact same thing. Once again I wanted to drive home that equality exists in sports, and the like mindedness that two athletes from different backgrounds possess.
The third genre piece is a thank you note, “Thank You for the Chlorine Rashes,” but in the form of a free-verse poem. I wanted to do it in a stream-of-consciousness fashion, which didn’t really make sense when it was prose and not poetry. So, I changed it, and made it a free-verse poem with very little structure. This was meant as an ode to water polo, my favorite sport and the team I was captain of this past spring. Water polo helped me relieve stress, befriend those outside of the classes I took, and really find myself by developing leadership skills and determination. This is gratitude that has built up over the past four year, and in one sitting I let out all of the thoughts and emotions that were attached to this sports flow out onto paper, which really wouldn’t be accurately represented by a neatly organize thank you. I thought it was important to include this piece because, as I mentioned earlier, my experiences with sports inspired me to go the direction I did with this project.
The final piece is a collage, “In Summary,” is meant to be just that, a summary of the entire  project in one image. It contains the cover of The Boys in the Boat, a picture of the pool to represent my own experiences, a picture of the actual team the The Boys in the Boat is about, and images of different sports being played by different cultures, which is essentially what my golden thread was.
This project was took time and took away sleep, but in the end I’m more than happy with the final result. I hope that, as I think this project was meant to achieve, you can understand the incredible amount of knowledge and skills that I absorbed this year, and I hope you enjoyed my writing!
Sincerely,

Sean “Chupi” Finn-Samuels

Wednesday, May 13, 2015

SPORTS

Unfortunately, I am  not quite ready to write a draft of the expository essay yet, so this blog post will be a summary of further research I’ve done. I think the most relevant and interesting topic that I can research is the use of athletics in impoverished communities. In The Boys in the Boat, the protagonist, Joe Rantz, feels like a misfit at the University of Washington. He watches his peers walk by in crisp sweaters, polished shoes and ironed pants, feeling insecure as a result of his hand-me-down sweaters, scuffed shoes and crumpled pants. As somewhat of a coping mechanism, knowing that his future looked grim because of his financial status, he took up rowing. He was strong and fit because of the hard labor he had to do growing up to survive, so he made the team and went on to defeat the East coast rowing powerhouses and even the teams across the Atlantic at Oxford and Cambridge. The story of the underdog, whether it be with regards to social, physical, or economic status, is a common one. The idea of sports as a coping mechanism and sports for the benefit of children and teens in poverty is one that pertains to today’s society, and is something that I am interested in.
Based on what I’ve read in The Boys in the Boat, sports are an excellent past time for impoverished youth. Many organization exist with the goal of bringing solid athletic programs and facilities to areas of poverty. Back in 2002, the United Nations started a project called the Millennium Project, an effort to reduce poverty around the world. Bringing sports to poor areas was one of the goals of this project, and they wrote a blurb on how exactly they defined sports, and why it is beneficial to bring them to these areas. First, they define sports as being different than recreational play, stating that there are more rigid rules, more organization, and more competition. One of the biggest claims regarding the positive impact of sports is, “Many of the core values inherent in sport are compatible with the principles necessary for development and peace, such as fair play, co-operation, sharing and respect.” Athletics help children with bonding, self-esteem and resilience, all character traits that are important for our youth to develop. The reason that sports need to be brought to these communities is that “Data from our surveys indicate that children, young people and adults living in more deprived areas are less likely to participate in sport, with adults also less likely,” according to Sports Wales, an organization dedicated to “developing and promoting sport and physical activity in Wales.” While this claim comes from data taken in Wales, there’s no doubt that this is an issue that poor communities in the United States and other parts of the world encounter as well.
As an athlete for as long as I can remember, I can attest to the positive impact that sports have had on me as a person. While I am not poor, sports are an easy way to help with youth development across all socioeconomic statuses. Sports taught me to stand up for myself, trust in myself, and be a leader, all skills that helped me rise to captain of the ETHS water polo team by senior year. I am legitimately excited to keep researching this topic because not only is it relevant, but it is also close to my heart.